The thing I like most about "This Dream The World Is Having About Itself" is the lines/stanza breaks. The sentences continue to the next stanza but if you look at one stanza, there is meaning behind each part. For example:
"we were sisters at the prairie's edge: IYou can see it in the lines here. I especially like that last part "when she believed she could still live". These line/stanza breaks give the piece something, some character, that I love.
who dreamed between sage-green pages, and you
a girl who feared you'd die in you twenties.
Both of us barefoot, wearing light summer
dresses from the Thirties, our mother's good
old days, when she still believed she could live"
I also love the moving through decades. We cover a lot of time in this poem but it works for the piece.
Let's see what everyone else thinks in class.
I love the imagery of the land in this poem, as well as its sense of history.
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